Feature #7555

Greeter revamp: Validate wordings of "Welcome" and "Advanced"

Added by sajolida 2014-07-10 22:20:58 . Updated 2020-04-15 06:04:57 .

Status:
Resolved
Priority:
Normal
Assignee:
Category:
Target version:
Start date:
2014-07-10
Due date:
% Done:

100%

Feature Branch:
Type of work:
User interface design
Blueprint:

Starter:
0
Affected tool:
Welcome Screen
Deliverable for:

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#1 Updated by intrigeri 2014-07-10 23:42:19

  • Tracker changed from Bug to Feature
  • Subject changed from Validate the wording of the new greeter to Validate the wording of the new Greeter

Is this really about documentation? It feels like user interface design to me.

#2 Updated by sajolida 2014-07-13 07:12:42

  • Type of work changed from Documentation to User interface design

#3 Updated by intrigeri 2014-07-19 16:19:52

  • blocked by Feature #7549: Greeter revamp: Redesign "Welcome" and "Advanced" added

#4 Updated by intrigeri 2014-07-19 16:20:08

  • Category set to 165

#5 Updated by sajolida 2014-11-07 11:46:13

  • Subject changed from Validate the wording of the new Greeter to Greeter revamp: Validate wordings of "Welcome" and "Advanced"
  • Status changed from Confirmed to Resolved
  • Assignee deleted (sajolida)
  • Parent task deleted (Feature #5464)

#6 Updated by sajolida 2014-11-07 11:46:24

  • blocks deleted (Feature #7549: Greeter revamp: Redesign "Welcome" and "Advanced")

#7 Updated by sajolida 2014-11-07 11:46:33

#8 Updated by BitingBird 2014-11-07 23:50:10

  • Welcome

- I’d remove the “!” in “Welcome to Tails!”, because titles don’t need ponctuation.

- The “quick setup” and “advanced configuration” on the same button seem contradictory to me. So I guess it’s not very clear without exploring what it is about.

  • Advanced

- “show passwords” -> it’s supposed to be the same, so I would say “show password”

- “Look like Windows 8” -> maybe “looks” ? (the camouflage looks, 3rd person) ?

- “Hide the serial number” -> idem, “hides”

- The “more options” link for camouflage is aligned right, and not the others, but I guess it’s not the real version anyway :)

Otherwise it seems good to me, but I don’t have the text in the “more info” links.

#9 Updated by BitingBird 2014-11-09 21:31:34

I also realised, since the wording is decided including options not yet available, maybe the wording for Feature #7723 and Feature #6811 should be decided now too ?

#10 Updated by sajolida 2014-11-10 11:25:04

I asked a native English speaker for his advice on this one.

#11 Updated by sajolida 2014-11-14 11:08:02

He prefers the original “imperative” form: “Hide the serial number…”.

#12 Updated by SpencerOne 2016-04-08 15:09:18

  • % Done changed from 0 to 100

#13 Updated by intrigeri 2020-04-15 06:04:57

  • Affected tool changed from Greeter to Welcome Screen