Tails

. I don’t really like this
but I wasn’t sure how to do things differently until now. In your branch
you’re adding another one. Taking a step back, maybe we could merge your
new section with “Your wallet can be recovered…” and create a

section called “Recover your wallet from its seed” (or something like
this). Then we could try to move “Electrum uses mBTC…” and “Do not
blindly trust…” at the beginning of the page and have the section
about recovering right after them.

* If we end up moving this content outside of

then we should write
markdown instead of full HTML (and rescue the translation from “Your
wallet can be recovered…” which will become fuzzy.

• The intro to your section (“If Electrum”) looks like an algorithm (to
  avoid that feeling, dotted lists should be introduced with full
  sentences). As you know, I’m myself a big fan of dotted lists but here
  it sounds a bit too much. Could you try to rephrase this as one sentence
  and see if it flows better?

• In English “may” could be permission or probability and “might” only
  probability. In our website I consistently use “might” for probability
  and “may” only for permission. It’s correct grammatically speaking and
  no big deal but you know I

• You’re introducing the terminology “seed phrase” when we’re talking
  about “seed” (only) elsewhere. How is that? What does Electrum do?

• Earlier in the document we say “Your wallet can be recovered entirely
  from its seed” but in your section you’re asking for “seed phrase,
  master key, a list of Bitcoin addresses or a list of private keys”. What
  are the “master key”, “list of Bitcoin addresses”, and “list of private
  keys”? Is this terminology used in Electrum? Are you using “or” to mean
  either a “seed phrase”, a “master key”, a “list of Bitcoin addresses”,
  OR a “list of private keys”?

• Always use present tense when possible, and avoid future tense (almost
  always) and past tense (when you can instead describe the current state
  of things) because it’s unclear to which point in time you are referring
  to. So get rid of “will” in your text and maybe replace “got corrupted”
  by “is corrupted”.

• Be neutral and avoid saying that things are simple.