Bug #17519

Tweak veracrypt doc

Added by CyrilBrulebois 2020-03-11 05:43:54 . Updated 2020-03-12 09:12:34 .

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Resolved
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Low
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CyrilBrulebois
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Contributors documentation
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Description

It seems to me the first sentence of https://tails.boum.org/contribute/release_process/veracrypt/ would benefit from a comma, dot, or from losing some words since the first and last parts are similar?

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#1 Updated by intrigeri 2020-03-11 08:53:06

  • Status changed from Confirmed to In Progress

Applied in changeset commit:tails|fcc81243d253c2dc5b5cf31cb9595d85b3dd5904.

#2 Updated by intrigeri 2020-03-11 09:01:11

  • Status changed from In Progress to Needs Validation
  • Assignee set to CyrilBrulebois

Oh my, indeed, that sentence did not make much sense.
I’ve tried to fix it.

#3 Updated by CyrilBrulebois 2020-03-12 09:12:34

  • Status changed from Needs Validation to Resolved

Perfect, thanks; marking as resolved as it reached the master branch already.