Bug #10630

Improve instructions on persistence

Added by sajolida 2015-11-24 02:14:22 . Updated 2015-12-17 03:39:02 .

Status:
Resolved
Priority:
Normal
Assignee:
Category:
Installation
Target version:
Start date:
2015-11-24
Due date:
% Done:

0%

Feature Branch:
web/10630-persistence-instructions
Type of work:
End-user documentation
Blueprint:

Starter:
Affected tool:
Installation Assistant
Deliverable for:

Description

  • Restructure all persistence instructions [72]
  • Try to remove bits of persistence instructions [72]
  • Simplify explanation of Read-Only
  • Add partial screenshot to Applications menu [96] (this one can be done later)
  • Add screenshot of Tails Greeter with persistence

Subtasks


History

#1 Updated by sajolida 2015-11-24 02:28:02

  • Description updated

#2 Updated by sajolida 2015-11-24 02:45:04

#3 Updated by sajolida 2015-12-09 10:01:22

  • Description updated

#4 Updated by sajolida 2015-12-09 11:04:55

  • Status changed from Confirmed to In Progress
  • Feature Branch set to web/10630-persistence-instructions

Done most of it, I’m missing the Tails Greeter screenshot.

#5 Updated by sajolida 2015-12-10 03:02:11

  • Assignee changed from sajolida to tchou
  • QA Check set to Ready for QA

Done in 2422723.

#6 Updated by tchou 2015-12-12 04:24:34

  • Assignee changed from tchou to sajolida

OK.

The only thing is the “Read-Only” option, but we are Greeter dependent.
I feel the the black “Read-Only” suggest an action.
Maybe add some ( ) to suggest it’s not the common use case ?

#7 Updated by sajolida 2015-12-16 10:51:16

  • Assignee changed from sajolida to tchou

I was doubting about mentioning the Read-Only option at all. Now I’m removing it with c012949, please have a quick look.

#8 Updated by tchou 2015-12-16 11:13:35

  • QA Check changed from Ready for QA to Pass

Yes !

#9 Updated by tchou 2015-12-16 11:13:48

  • Assignee changed from tchou to sajolida

#10 Updated by sajolida 2015-12-17 03:39:02

  • Status changed from In Progress to Resolved
  • Assignee deleted (sajolida)
  • QA Check deleted (Pass)

Merging, then.