Bug #10617

Explain better the ISO verification

Added by sajolida 2015-11-24 01:51:32 . Updated 2015-12-23 06:40:23 .

Status:
Resolved
Priority:
Normal
Assignee:
Category:
Installation
Target version:
Start date:
2015-11-24
Due date:
% Done:

0%

Feature Branch:
web/10617-explain-verification
Type of work:
End-user documentation
Blueprint:

Starter:
Affected tool:
Installation Assistant
Deliverable for:

Description

  • Rephrase “Download and verify” title [18]
  • Add introduction to “Download and verify” [18] [25]
  • Rephrase “extension” as “add-on” [20]
  • Explain verification for BitTorrent [25]
  • Add toggle to explain verification and thread model of verification [25] (this one can be done later but might be able to keep in mind while working on the rest)
  • Explain better why we are using debian-keyring [45] (can be done later as well)

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#1 Updated by sajolida 2015-11-24 02:22:42

  • Description updated

#2 Updated by sajolida 2015-11-24 02:26:52

  • Description updated

#3 Updated by sajolida 2015-11-24 02:47:06

#4 Updated by sajolida 2015-12-11 13:48:29

  • Assignee changed from sajolida to tchou
  • QA Check set to Ready for QA
  • Feature Branch set to web/10617-explain-verification

Done everything we wanted for the beta, please review.

Then I shouldn’t close this ticket to work on the optional things.

#5 Updated by tchou 2015-12-12 05:20:45

  • Assignee changed from tchou to sajolida

OK.

+ Maybe we could add a popover to explain a bit what is an “ISO image”. Maybe as a first step to say “ISO image file” ?

#6 Updated by sajolida 2015-12-15 03:58:16

  • Assignee changed from sajolida to tchou

Maybe that’s short enough to be displayed to everybody. Tell me what you think of 05caeb1.

#7 Updated by tchou 2015-12-15 06:06:13

  • Assignee changed from tchou to sajolida
  • QA Check changed from Ready for QA to Pass

It’s nice.

#8 Updated by sajolida 2015-12-16 08:23:03

  • Target version changed from Tails_1.8 to Tails_2.0
  • QA Check changed from Pass to Dev Needed

So I did a first merge and postponed the rest for 2.0.

#9 Updated by sajolida 2015-12-17 08:26:44

I’m tempted to change the caption of the link from “How?” to “How does it work?”. What do you think?

Also, this probably needs a bit of CSS as the current toggle are pretty ugly. See attachment. Maybe this would have to be done before the beta. Reassigning to tchou to have his opinion. If you don’t want to do this before the beta reassign it to me as it was until now.

#10 Updated by tchou 2015-12-19 16:01:31

  • Assignee changed from tchou to sajolida
  • QA Check changed from Dev Needed to Ready for QA

- I suggest to put the toggle on “the add-on verifies your download automatically.”
- css done in 3c6dd165c4e95bf31153ee12336c53ab9c9c542e

#11 Updated by sajolida 2015-12-23 06:40:23

  • Status changed from Confirmed to Resolved
  • Assignee deleted (sajolida)
  • Target version deleted (Tails_2.0)
  • QA Check deleted (Ready for QA)

3c6dd16 was quite approximate: working pretty badly in some context
(for example the router and overview) and breaking the restart
troubleshooting section. As we’re already quite late on the schedule
for the beta, I spent 3 hours fixing it myself to avoid more round
trips.